Open Poetry
Whether it has form, rhyme, rhythm, or not, post it here. Whatever you like. I'll start.Heaven and Hell Here I stand between Heaven and Hell, This place where angels once fought and fell. This place...
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Bite me. I actually do have a six-pack, not like it matters. Anyway, I wrote something new:Turning Point No one can touch me. I slip through your hands. Ignoring demands. Do you understand? Raised on...
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I'll write this just for this topic, Metaphor time bitches. Silent quake. Innards shake. Delving deeper. It is the silent creeper. Running along the path. The time has passed, post hath. The moon...
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OMG it's sex!!! Nice, though. Reminds me a bit of Mary's poetry, when she wrote. ____________________ Quiero que me pegues tan fuerte como puedas.Metro•Realm•Seren•DTP•Mag
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I'm experimenting a bit. Most of this isn't structured, so you're supposed to just read it through unless there's punctuation.No fewer than fifty No fewer than fifty threads of a barbarian age Still...
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I liked the flow of the first, I didn't really feel yah on the second. =\, but I really liked the 3rd one. Ask her out Banku. How dare you edit your post, I knew something changed within my Rival...
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Thanks. The first one is about kids at the rapid train station. The second one is about my biology class, which is made up of med students...and me, that English major guy. I was trying to capture my...
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More different poetry:Other half My other half is half insane – I praise the day we broke in twain, For now I’m free to stay in line, Firmly planted on the ground. My other half is half alive ...Read...
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Notes 1 Too much to be random, it seems Twist of whiteness Deism – who set pieces in motion? Metaphysical pondering. Notes 2 Enjoyment of time alone Celebration of freedom Organized syntactically...
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As you asked, my own rendition of it: (227.) In The Space =----------------------------------------------------= In the space, Between your eyes and face. Below the floor. Through the door. There is...
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very cool. ____________________ It's like Christmas, only without presents, snow, parties, a tree, carols, December, and egg nog.Metro•Realm•Seren•DTP•Mag
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Telling Secrets to the Moon Let’s be promiscuous, dear. Let’s let the moon smile on us, blushing, As she hears us whisper secrets back and forth. And she’ll wonder if we mind it That she knows us so...
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...Crap, I really like it, but can't say why. Hm. I like the words used, but the personification of the moon is the best part indeed.Quote: Don’t be sad for us because We want it this way. The earth...
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I posted this at Metro, so why not here, too? You and Yours You, the end, the simple beginning. You, the light, the reason, the cause. You, the night, the season of stars. You, and You, and You, and...
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Heh, I'll do the same thing as V6. (279.) Stars =---------------------------------------------------= Stars shine brightest at night. As the moon take flight. I see her face when I look to the sky....
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Seems kind of similar to the one you posted in the other thread though.
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